Thank you very much for picking up the error. I am presently working with an editor to refine the text. Ill get to this once we release the whole first issue on the web comic.
In the meantime you can read the most updated pages on my patreon http://www.patreon.com/anthonychristou we are up to page 14 now.
You have the wrong homonym in the third set of words. It should say barren, not baron.
I love the look of the page, though.
Thank you very much for picking up the error. I am presently working with an editor to refine the text. Ill get to this once we release the whole first issue on the web comic.
In the meantime you can read the most updated pages on my patreon http://www.patreon.com/anthonychristou we are up to page 14 now.